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1 Introduction
1.1 State Of The Practice

Large software systems continuous evolve to meet the ever changing user needs. Changes can be driven by market pressure, adaptation to legislation or improvement needs. Maintain trace links between subsequent release of software systems is important to evaluating the version deltas, highlighting the effort/code delta inconsistencies and assessing the change history. It can help planning the future steps of evolution and evaluate the reliability and cost of the changes before an actual intervention takes place.

 

The Proofread:

1 Introduction
1.1 State of the Of The Practice

00000Large software systems continuously evolve to meet the ever-changing user needs. The changes can be (driven) caused by market pressure, adaptation to legislation or improvement needs. Maintaining traceable links among between subsequent releases of software systems is important to evaluating the version deltas, highlighting the effort/code delta inconsistencies, and assessing the change history. Because it (It) can help planning the future steps of evolution, and evaluating the reliability and cost of the changes before an actual intervention takes place.

 

The finalized:

1 Introduction
1.1 State of the Practice

00000Large software systems continuously evolve to meet the ever-changing user needs. The changes can be caused by market pressure, adaptation to legislation or improvement needs. Maintaining traceable links among subsequent releases of software systems is important to evaluating the version deltas, highlighting the effort/code delta inconsistencies, and assessing the change history. Because it can help planning the future steps of evolution, and evaluating the reliability and cost of the changes before an actual intervention takes place.